peer review2 20707

5 points

• Technically perfect

• Follows the classical argument

• Displays an interesting and unique perspective on a highly specialized topic

• Thought provoking and captivating

• Clearly the product of extensive drafting and research

4 points

• Technically perfect

• Follows the classical argument

• Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic

• Clearly the product of thorough drafting and research

3 points

• Follows the classical argument

• Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic

• Some evidence of drafting and research

2 points

• Displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic

0 points

• Incomplete or inadequate

Grade
According to the rubric above, what grade would you give this essay? Why?
4 because her essay displays a unique perspective on a highly specialized topic

How does this essay need to improve to get a better grade?
i can't really understand the confirmation

Thesis
What is the thesis?
animal testing should be stopped

Is the thesis clear and debatable?
yes
If you (The reviewer) wrote this essay, how would you have written the thesis?
animal testing should be continued

Any other thoughts?
she chose very interesting topic

Classical Argument
Can you easily identify the 5 parts of the classical argument? If no, what parts are missing?
yes

Does the introduction catch your attention? Does it comfortably lead to the thesis?
yes

Does the narration give all the necessary background information to understand the topic?
yes

Does the confirmation adequately support the thesis?
yes

Does the refutation and concession address a realistic counterpoint? Does it adequately dispute the counterpoint, or respond in a reasonable manner?
.yes

Does the conclusion summarize the article and address the larger significance of the thesis?
yes
What suggestions do you have for improving the classical argument structure?
yes

Persuasion
When you started reading the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
i agree

When you finished the essay, did you agree or disagree with the thesis?
yes

If your mind changed, why? What parts of the essay were persuasive?
no

How could the author enhance the persuasive parts of their essay?
i think her opinion should be more added and that will guarantee her higer grade.

Research
Is the author using research effectively?
yes definetely

Is the research from appropriate sources?
yes
Are the sources obvious?
yes
Are the pieces of evidence relevant to the thesis or essay?
yes

Are there any parts of the essay that need evidence to support the claims?
no they're alright